For this first one I'm trying to make sure the boy is separated from the others. To get this I have physically moved him back while also keeping his value more high key. The other boys are also made darker to reflect their mood.
I made this second draft to explore other story points which offered different compositional opportunities. I do like that he is literally moving away in this piece while at the same time the other boys aren't vilified.
Any feedback is most welcome. Thanks!
Alex Harvey
hi alex, i prefer the 2nd sketch. it would be nice to see an additional boy in the background view the video. the main boy's bike isn't working very well, we need to see more of it, like part of the rear wheel. anatomy-wise the figures need some work. decide how you're going to draw people's chins. are they going to be rounded like the boys in the background or pointed like the main boy? the hand & fingers on the handlebar need work too.
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